Wednesday, March 24, 2010
The Following Post
This new post, Random Shuffle and Memories, is the first paper I wrote for my English class. We were to take five songs that mean something to us and say why. Granted I changed some of the stories up a little to save me form having to explain to my classmates trivial details, therefore rendering them bored stiff. Yet, the overall emotion I try to convey behind the situation is 100% sincere. I am also happy to report I received 100% on it when my teacher, Mr. Perks, graded it. Woot for me. Tell me what you think.
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Please take note of the following definitions:
ReplyDeleteFALLOW - (primarily an adjective) plowed but unseeded land
FOLLOW - (verb) to come next after something else in sequence, order of time, etc.
(Sorry to be critical but this is the second time you have misspelled this word, so I figured you probably just didn't realize.)
Oh, and 'yea' should be replaced with 'yay' here... 'yea' is not what you mean, being closer to 'aye' and with other biblical connotations.
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